Wednesday 30 July 2014

First Draft -Winter

Winter

imagesI jump out of bed put my coat and gloves on because I just can’t wait to get outside . As I walk out the door the frozen brees wipes me in the face. As I Take a a few  more steps onto the deck as I do every morning one foot goes up and next minute I’m done on the ground flat on my bottom.I get back up acting like I didn't even fall. I carfly walk of the deck and on to the grass.The grass was frozen hard I could feel the  grass snapping  under my feet as I walk along…

Libby

1 comment:

  1. Hi Libby
    I really like your piece of writing. I just have two questions....
    Were you trying to say whips my face, and did you mean carefully??
    From Ella

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