First Draft -Winter

Winter

I jump out of bed put my coat and gloves on because I just can’t wait to get outside . As I walk out the door the frozen brees wipes me in the face. As I Take a a few  more steps onto the deck as I do every morning one foot goes up and next minute I’m done on the ground flat on my bottom.I get back up acting like I didn't even fall. I carfly walk of the deck and on to the grass.The grass was frozen hard I could feel the  grass snapping  under my feet as I walk along…

Libby

Hide and Seek

Hide and Seek

Level 1. Literal Meaning (we find evidence in the text)

the person hid in the tool shed. he hide under sacks. The floor was cold.

Level 2. Inferential Meaning (we read between the lines to infer what the writer has implied)

the sacks have had seaweed or beachwood in them at some stage. They gave up after a while. they find him but tell him and leave him there.

Level 3. Applied Meaning (we decide what the author might think from what has been said)

sometimes children are mean when playing hide and seek The boy who hide  under the sacks won

Main stars

Athletics

Athletics is a day were  you Verse people in High jump long jump shot put and running.

Have fun and play with people.And have a go at every thing.